The unviolated honour of your wife. Once this, 3-Your long experience of her wisdom, Plead on her part some cause to you unknown; And let us to the Tiger all to dinner; And, about evening, come yourself alone, And dwell upon your grave when you are dead: For ever hous'd, where it once gets possession.* 3 Once this,] This expression appears to me so singular, that I cannot help suspecting the passage to be corrupt. Malone. 66 Once this, may mean, once for all, at once. So, in Sydney's Arcadia, Book I: "Some perchance loving my estate, others my Irson. But once, I know all of them," &c. Again, ibid. B. III: She hit him, with his own sworde, such a blowe upon the waste, that she almost cut him asunder: once she sundred his soule from his body, sending it to Proserpina, an angry goddess against ravishers." Steevens. 4 Your long experience of her wisdom, Plead on her part-] The old copy reads-your, in both places. Corrected by Mr. Rowe. Malone. 5 the doors are made against you.] Thus the old edition. The modern editors read: the doors are barr'd against you. To make the door, is the expression used to this day in some counties of England, instead of, to bar the door. Steevens. 6 supposed by the common rout -] For supposed I once thought it might be more commodious to substitute supported; but there is no need of change: supposed is founded on supposition, made by conjecture. Johnson. 7 upon succession;] Succession is often used as a quadrisyllable by our author, and his contemporaries. So, Act IV, sc. i, line 5, satisfaction composes half a verse: "Therefore make present satisfaction Malone. Ant. E. You have prevail'd; I will depart in quiet, And, in despight of mirth,' mean to be merry. I know a wench of excellent discourse,Pretty and witty; wild, and, yet too, gentle;There will we dine: this woman that I mean, My wife (but, I protest, without desert) Hath oftentimes upbraided me withal: To her will we to dinner.-Get you home, And fetch the chain; by this, I know, 'tis made: Bring it, I pray you, to the Porcupine; For there's the house; that chain will I bestow Upon mine hostess there: good sir, make haste: SCENE II. The same. Enter LUCIANA1 and ANTIPHOLUS of Syracuse. Luc. And may it be that you have quite forgot A husband's office? shall, Antipholus, hate, Even in the spring of love, thy love-springs rot? Shall love, in building, grow so ruinate?? For ever hous'd, where it once gets possession.] The adverb once is wanting in the first folio. Steevens. The second folio has once; which rather improves the sense, and is not inconsistent with the metre. Tyrwhitt. 9 And, in despight of mirth,] Mr. Theobald does not know what to make of this; and, therefore, has put wrath instead of mirth into the text, in which he is followed by the Oxford editor. But the old reading is right, and the meaning is,-I will be merry, even out of spite to mirth, which is now, of all things, the most unpleasing to me. Warburton. Though mirth hath withdrawn herself from me, and seems determined to avoid me, yet in despight of her, and whether she will or not, I am resolved to be merry. Heath. 1 Enter Luciana -] Here, in the old blundering first folio, we find,-"Enter Juliana." Corrected in the second folio. Steevens. If you did wed my sister for her wealth, Then, for her wealth's sake, use her with more kindness: Or, if you like elsewhere, do it by stealth; 2 Muffle your false love with some show of blindness: that you have quite forgot &c.] In former copies: And may it be that you have quite forgot A husband's office? Shall, Antipholus, Even in the spring of love, thy love-springs rot? This passage has hitherto laboured under a double corruption. What conceit could our editors have of love in buildings growing ruinate? Our poet meant no more than this: Shall thy love-springs rot, even in the spring of love? and shall thy love grow ruinous, even while 'tis but building up? The next corruption is by an accident at press, as I take it. This scene for fifty-two lines successively is strictly in alternate rhymes; and this measure is never broken, but in the second and fourth lines of these two couplets. 'Tis certain, I think, a monosyllable dropt from the tail of the second verse; and I have ventured to supply it by, I hope, a probable conjecture. Theobald. Mr. Theobald's emendations are-the word-hate, supplied at the end of the second line, and, in the fourth, building given instead of buildings. Love-springs are young plants or shoots of love. Thus, in The Faithful Shepherdess of Fletcher: "The nightingale among the thick-leav'd springs "That sits alone in sorrow." وو The rhyme which Mr. Theobald would restore, stands thus in the old edition: shall Antiphols If, therefore, instead of ruinate, we should read ruinous, the passage may remain as it was originally written; and perhaps, indeed, throughout the play we should read Antiphilus, a name which Shakspeare might have found in some quotations from Pliny, B. XXXV, and XXXVII. Antiphilus is also one of the heroes in Sidney's Arcadia. Ruinous is justified by a passage in The Two Gentlemen of Verona, Act V, sc. iv: "Lest growing ruinous the building fall." Throughout the first folio, Antipholus occurs much more often than Antipholis, even where the rhyme is not concerned; and were the rhyme defective here, such transgressions are accounted for in other places. Steevens. The word-hate, in the first line, is introduced by Theobald, without authority, and certainly injures the sense of the passage. Hate rotting the springs of love, is a strange idea. It appears to me that the true reading is that suggested, though not adopted, by Steevens: Let not my sister read it in your eye; Be not thy tongue thy own shame's orator; Bear a fair presence, though your heart be tainted; And let her read it in thy looks at board: Ill deeds are doubled with an evil word. Alas, poor women! make us but believe, Being compact of credit," that you love us; Though others have the arm, show us the sleeve; We in your motion turn, and you may move us. shall, Antipholus, Even in the spring of love, thy love-springs rot? Which preserves both the sense and the rhyme. M. Mason. 119th Sonnet: "And ruin'd love, when it is built anew -: In support of Mr. Theobald's first emendation, a passage in our author's 10th Sonnet may be produced: thou art so possess'd with murderous hate, "That 'gainst thyself thou stick'st not to conspire, "Seeking that beauteous roof to ruinate, "Which to repair should be thy chief desire." Again, in The Rape of Lucrece: 3 "To ruinate proud buildings with thy hours." Malone. his own attaint?] The old copy has-attaine. The emendation is Mr. Rowe's. Malone. 4 Alas, poor women! make us but believe, &c.] The old copynot. Steevens. From the whole tenour of the context it is evident, that this negative (not) got place in the first copies instead of but. And these two monosyllables have by mistake reciprocally dispossessed one another in many other passages of our author's works. Theobald. 5 Being compact of credit,] Means, being male altogether of credulity. So, in Heywood's Iron Age, Part II, 1632: 66 she's compact 66 Merely of blood —.” Again, in our author's Venus and Adonis: "Love is a spirit all compact of fire." Steevens. Then, gentle brother, get you in again; Comfort my sister, cheer her, call her wife: 'Tis holy sport, to be a little vain," When the sweet breath of flattery conquers strife. Ant. S. Sweet mistress, (what your name is else, I know not, Nor by what wonder you do hit on mine,) Less, in your knowledge, and your grace, you show not, The folded meaning of your words' deceit. Transform me then, and to your power I'll yield. But if that I am I, then well I know, Your weeping sister is no wife of mine, Nor to her bed no homage do I owe; Far more, far more, to you do I decline. O, train me not, sweet mermaid," with thy note, Spread o'er the silver waves thy golden hairs, 9 And, in that glorious supposition, think 6 vain,] Is light of tongue, not veracious. Johnson. 7 sweet mermaid,] Mermaid is only another name for syren. So, in the Index to P. Holland's translation of Pliny's Natural History: "Mermaids in Homer were witches, and their songs enchauntements." Steevens. 8 in thy sister's flood-] The old copy reads-sister. Corrected by the editor of the second folio. Malone. 9 — as a bed I'll take thee,] The old copy reads—as a bud. Mr. Edwards suspects a mistake of one letter in the passage, and would read: And as a bed I'll take them, and there lie. Perhaps, however, both the ancient readings may be right: |